Laura's Appt with Dr. Sharp

This is my first post to Zity, I hope you like it.

A few months ago, I started a project to write a believable, enjoyable med-fet story with developed characters, in the style of a novel, and without the feel of being pornographic; I'd like to share it with the Zity.biz community and see what others think of it.

The story is written in 12 chapters and touches on a wide area of fetish genres, with med-fet being the main one. The lead character is a 22 YOF named Laura. One thing I've really tried to do here is "get deep into Laura's head" and describe in detail her thoughts, fears, and memories of being at the doctor as a kid, as she aged, and as the current examination and rather painful treatment with Dr. Sharp progresses.

Throughout the story, there is the underlying theme of Laura more deeply realizing and embracing many aspects of her submissive nature.

I really attempt to develop the characters and hopefully give you a better "sense and feel" mental picture of the settings and the events.

Your feedback is always requested and appreciated, good or bad. I value your comments.

Thanks!