Your pet peeves in medfet stories

I also prefer realistic type exam stories. I have written several that were published here. I admit that i have a hard time ending a story. i always appreciate helpful criticism.

This is across the board for anything I read….unrealistic aspects/positions and numerous errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling, etc.

The use of slang word ie: pussy, cock… And like someone else mentioned run on sentences and paragraphs and coma cozy.

Sex in costumes. If he's pulling down scrubs instead of jeans and they're screwing on an exam table instead of a bed, it's not medfet, it's a really good halloween night. Similarly, calling him doctor while she climaxes also doesn't equal medfet.

@agracier How come were these authors outed, if they did not sign with their name?

I don’t really enjoy too many of them, because they drag on, and move away from the subject. A realistic and fun story, doesn’t sound canned and rehearsed. An example might be:” I could hear her sigh, when I slowly stuck the thermometer up her tight ass,” as opposed to: “ We were sitting on her parent’s porch, listening to the crickets ,on that sultry summer night, thinking about how hot we were.” I don’t know. Just my two cents.

@agracier How come were these authors outed, if they did not sign with their name?

Every now and then, not very frequently, we would get an urgent request from one of the authors to please take down their stories on Specpages. We always complied.

Some explained that they were found out by family or colleagues, probably by not being careful enough or by being found out by people who were real sneaky snoops going through other people's computers and files. Or maybe they revealed too much in confidence in some instances.

I realize that I seem to be in the minority, but I don't mind when an obviously medfet story gets sexual. To me, that's half the fun. My particular pet peeve is when they rush the nudity. Having the patient undress gradually, a bit at a time as the exam progresses, that's nice. Even better is touching and examining through/under clothing as things progress.

Now, that being said, I prefer stories that are sexual without actually involving sex, at least in the beginning. Arousal, orgasms (willing or otherwise), that sort of things. And if the story then evolves into a fully sexual relationship, that's seriously hot.

I usually prefer realistic scenes but lately have been okay with certain sexual ones

ie a handsy doctor or a patient who comes in with a complaint of erectile or inability to orgasm issues and needs a full work up, which includes sexual response tests okay

the ones where the patient comes in with “cock craving disorder” and is naked with the doc before even an attempt at an exam… not for me

I know this is 90% of med-fet stories, but I am not a fan of the protagonist being ‘embarrassed’. Humiliated, I get (although I personally don't feel humiliated in medical situations), but being embarrassed seems to unnecessary, especially if the patient has been to the doctor several times.

Please stop having the protagonists wear underwear that is too small or too tight. Who keeps underwear around that no longer fits?

• Main focus is on being embarrassed
• Insertion of speculum resulting in automatic orgasm that the doctor won't notice
• Pussy/dick/etc instead of proper medical terms

Fantasies are always more fun then reality . Like having you're diaper changed by a nurse as an adult . It's really not sexy at all but in a fantasy it could be fun , Or having a catheter put in by a female nurse , again in a fantasy that really could be fun . but in realty it's not . I have ben handled and “cleaned” diapered and “midsection” cleaned and worked over time and again with no thought of any kind of sex in reality , although thinking about it after was kind of fun . Then again today I was cleaned and had my catheter looked after with intensity looking for chaffing around the meatus by a professional care giver that also happened to be an old friend of my wife's before she passed away and has been my friend for many years I got so hard and there was a thought that I was really going to embarrass my self by having an orgasm right there in her hand . We had a good laugh and she hugged me before she left . now that left me with a good fantasy for some night in the future .

Hate pedophilic stuff and when exams start off realistically but then doc starts having random sex with patient. I like realistic consensual adults.

What turns me off in Medfet stories is the same thing that turns me off in Medfet porn… not enough clinical examination, and too much sex. Or overt sex.

I really hate poor grammar and lack of punctuation. I don't think there is anything wrong with what people want to write and share (that's the whole point of expressing yourself), nor do I think there is anything wrong with describing things in less clinical terms if you so choose. BUT - you better do it in a way someone can actually read it.

Implausibility even when the authors insist the story is true. For instance, I've read postings on this site with events that claim to be set in France but things don't match (e.g., they say things about medical insurance that don't match).

And, but that's not specific to medfet: entire stories in one paragraph.

I used to download the occasional medical erotica (J.C. Cummings is an author that comes to mind) on Kindle Unlimited but gave up on them a while back. The grammar and layout was always plenty professional, but they were so repetitive. Way too much emphasis on sex and not nearly enough on medical procedures.

And so many of them always delved into incest and/or corporal punishment. Who knew so many gynecologists also kept a wooden paddle in the cabinet with the speculums and lubricant to teach uncooperative patients a lesson? 🙄

Finally, I will echo what others have said about the original Speculum Pages. I think that site was my introduction to internet pornography back when I got my first desktop and dial-up internet access in the mid-90s. I discovered that site even before looking for medical fetish pictures.

One of my favorites was “An Exam to Remember,” a story about a guy who gets an eyeful when he discovers he can peek through a window at a gynecologist's office.

And, but that's not specific to medfet: entire stories in one paragraph.

Writing anything long in a single paragraph, be it a story or a long comment, is indeed annoying. Many's the time I have given up on trying to read such single paragraph writings, losing my place and just getting confused and losing interest because everything is all lumped up together.

That said, I remember being surprised that the use of paragraphs is a comparatively recently introduced notion. Depending on the source, paragraphs weren't used until the 16th or 18th century. Prior to that, things were written in one long block of words. Punctuation in the form of periods, comma's etc wasn't invented until the 7th century. Long ago enough from our point of view, but often problematic when it came to texts from Antiquity. Where did a sentence end if all words flowed together in one long line?

It can be seen how popular writers usually publish stories in short paragraphs. The big names in writing, the million-seller titles, the translated into 40 languages blockbusters are mostly written in short paragraphs. High brow stuff comes in longer paragraphs, often with a paragraph spanning an entire page. That makes for dull, plodding and slow reading.

Realistic anything.. same as spanking. I just find it boring or don't care at all.

Also I don't like pain or making things that shouldn't be painful painful or discomforting. Yea, I'm aware that this goes against the grain and rubs most people here the wrong way but I'm not gonna pretend or lie.

I do not like when the reactions or feelings or sensations of the patient are not explored. It's so intimate... the intimacy is what I crave.

I wouldn't/couldn't disagree with almost anything that's been typed on this long thread. Author grammar/spelling mistakes, abrupt endings, sexualization as the end result of an exam, or lazy formatting decisions can take me out the "mood" in which I go in when reading these. I would also say that I look for shock and embarrassment in every story. I don't really want the patient/subject to want a rectal temperature, instead trying to argue against it or get out of such a procedure. And, as the previous post mentioned, I would like to get a little exposition about how they're feeling, what their thoughts were about being subjected to such in childhood, that sort of thing. My main kink is rectal temperatures, so I really look for realism. The only time my interest crossover into sex, is maybe when a rectal temp is taken to assess ovulation, then the woman is inseminated(forcibly =) ).

Anything underage pedophile involved!!!

Anything underage pedophile involved!!!

Agree. And it pops up!

Agree. And it pops up!

@Rigel,

If I see it anywhere on this site, I immediately report it. I have absolutely zero tolerance for it!

Anything underage pedophile involved!!!

And...

I see it anywhere on this site, I immediately report it. I have absolutely zero tolerance for it!

@Fawkes it is best to report such issues, concerns, to moderation. Then it can be looked into and dealt with as needed.

And...@Fawkes it is best to report such issues, concerns, to moderation. Then it can be looked into and dealt with as needed.

@MissStress,

That is exactly what I do.

I hate bad grammar and sentence structure. I also hate when things go straight to sex.

When the doc has sex with or does other sex acts with the patient, or makes the patient do them to him/her. Ruins the story for me. I wouldn't allow that in a play exam either.

A lot of stories have “ implied underage”. They don’t state a character is underage, but imply it.. reformatory discipline and enemas, orphanage sex etc. some are more explicit about age (e.g. a 13 year old girl in a bdsm scene). Others state the characters are over 18, but the story line doesn’t support it (high school, living with parents etc.). I read a lot of stories where it was explicitly stated they were over 18 or implied, most likely as a cover. Probably not so much in the newer stories posted, moreso in the stories that were grandfathered in. I’m guessing there are a lot of stories in the library that explicitly or indirectly talk about underage topics

I’m really not qualified to judge what’s inappropriate or not.