Your pet peeves in medfet stories

I read a lot of stories where it was explicitly stated they were under 18 or implied, most likely as a cover. Probably not so much in the newer stories posted, moreso in the stories that were grandfathered in

Notions of propriety have evolved so quickly in the last years. And not for the better. The Western world is becoming harsh and unforgiving when it comes to notions of sexual mores and customs that were considered normal a few decades ago..

Things are only going to get much more repressive and worse.

The main issue that I have are overdramatized descriptions , and an uninteresting storyline, that drags on . In a real world situation, people don’t “ come in quarts,” or yell “more, more, more.” They usually say things like:” Ohhh, that feels great,” “ I like it,” or something similar. I’m speaking from personal experience. An actual sex act, is more mental than physical. Maybe other people have a different outlook.

I frankly prefer real accounts of actual physical exams and other medical experiences. But with outright fictional stories, they should stick closely to realistic dialogue.

I frankly prefer real accounts of actual physical exams and other medical experiences. But with outright fictional stories, they should stick closely to realistic dialogue.

Many people like to read certain words that are otherwise 'taboo' or considered too crude or inappropriate in real life. So getting these words or phrases into a story will never really be realistic. But then also not all that fulfilling for some readers either.

It's a fine balancing act writing things. Most of the (medfet/erotic) material is usually written for the satisfaction of the writer anyway. I've found that you're best off writing for yourself, leaving it be a period of time so you have time to forget what you wrote and then reading it again.

That way you get what you're really looking for.

Palpation and palpitations are two different words. So are shudder and shutter. So are lose and loose.

Palpation and palpitations are two different words. So are shudder and shutter. So are lose and loose.

As are "prostate" and "prostrate."