Story Scenario help

Hi so I wanted to do a scenario and needed help to flesh it out to make it believable. I love the thought of a female patient arriving on reception at a small doctor's clinic arriving late, the doctor is grumpy but is persuaded to see her in between patients. She has to strip in the waiting area and wait nude until the doctor can see her. Thoughts?

I'm assuming this question is in relation to a story plot, and I've reclassified it accordingly.

Sorry for my answer !!!

It maybe a Phantasie, but never possible in the truth !!!

But, perhaps a good Start for a story !!!

Kindly regards !!

Oh I love the idea of having to strip down right there in the waiting room. I request it in roleplays all the time.

I enjoy writing. For me, it's necessary to develop an outline with the ending in mind. I prefer to have elements that tap into the psychology of being examined, which includes anticipation and feelings of anxiety; , becoming submissive like having to wait endless for the doctor; and then facing vulnerability such as undressing. I wouldn't find being stripped naked and sitting in the waiting area to be beneficial for me as the writer. Where does one go from that point? Maybe you could share more of your intentions.

I enjoy writing. For me, it's necessary to develop an outline with the ending in mind. I prefer to have elements that tap into the psychology of being examined, which includes anticipation and feelings of anxiety; , becoming submissive like having to wait endless for the doctor; and then facing vulnerability such as undressing. I wouldn't find being stripped naked and sitting in the waiting area to be beneficial for me as the writer. Where does one go from that point? Maybe you could share more of your intentions.

Never thought of that but it makes sense. Figure out where you want to end up then build a path to it. Enlightening! TY!

I love the idea of being naked in front of others, the embarrassment, the anticipation, the awkwardness, etc. Just not likely to happen in this context. For me personally, the scenario of having a patient strip in the waiting room is far too unbelievable. I like stories to at least have some degree of reality, and this scenario would never happen. To be honest, I'd probably stop reading at this point.

Never thought of that but it makes sense. Figure out where you want to end up then build a path to it. Enlightening! TY!

That may be how a professional writer is supposed to write stories and novels. Create an outline that summarizes the story line and then fill it in as you go. This also allows for writers to skip parts if they are stuck on a particular part and then come back later. It also allows for big time writers to farm out the actual drudge of writing all the words to other writers in need of money. 😃

But the thing is erotica works almost in the opposite way: most people have an idea of where they wish to start, what the arousing premises are of their story. That is why so many erotic stories have a meticulous setting up of the circumstances and conditions of the tale and then often meander along as the writing is taking place because they take their cues from what they imagine while writing, which can be on a different tack than what was planned, if anything was planned at all.

Remember, we are amateurs and doing it for own own pleasure. We often start writing on an impulse and then go where the flow takes us. In any case, this is how I have experienced my own attempts.

If you can plan a story like the professionals, with a story outline and all, then I wouldn't waste time writing erotica. Figure out a good crime or thriller plot and maybe you can make some actual money out of your efforts.

The above post is so true. In other words just write something don't overcomplicate things.

One of the best stories I've read is the original "A waiting room with a view" story. The brilliance of this and similar stories is in it's straightforward well written medfet ENF / CMNF scenario.

I'm off to write a story along these lines. Maybe just a simple a man meets the doctor in a bar and asks him to do an exam on his wife while he watches.

Wife is naturally submissive and agrees to the scenario ... Doctor orders her to strip completely in front of the two of them before being examined completely nude in a lecture theatre in a teaching hospital. She enjoys the experience so much she asks to be exposed again.

You say you "wanted" to do this, so I presume you no longer want to. However, I'll drop in some thoughts.

A story, no matter its length, has a begining, a middle, and an end(ing). My thought is more a question: what is in the middle and en d(ing) of your story?