Your pet peeves in medfet stories

I read a lot of stories where it was explicitly stated they were under 18 or implied, most likely as a cover. Probably not so much in the newer stories posted, moreso in the stories that were grandfathered in

Notions of propriety have evolved so quickly in the last years. And not for the better. The Western world is becoming harsh and unforgiving when it comes to notions of sexual mores and customs that were considered normal a few decades ago..

Things are only going to get much more repressive and worse.

The main issue that I have are overdramatized descriptions , and an uninteresting storyline, that drags on . In a real world situation, people don’t “ come in quarts,” or yell “more, more, more.” They usually say things like:” Ohhh, that feels great,” “ I like it,” or something similar. I’m speaking from personal experience. An actual sex act, is more mental than physical. Maybe other people have a different outlook.

I frankly prefer real accounts of actual physical exams and other medical experiences. But with outright fictional stories, they should stick closely to realistic dialogue.

I frankly prefer real accounts of actual physical exams and other medical experiences. But with outright fictional stories, they should stick closely to realistic dialogue.

Many people like to read certain words that are otherwise 'taboo' or considered too crude or inappropriate in real life. So getting these words or phrases into a story will never really be realistic. But then also not all that fulfilling for some readers either.

It's a fine balancing act writing things. Most of the (medfet/erotic) material is usually written for the satisfaction of the writer anyway. I've found that you're best off writing for yourself, leaving it be a period of time so you have time to forget what you wrote and then reading it again.

That way you get what you're really looking for.

Palpation and palpitations are two different words. So are shudder and shutter. So are lose and loose.

Palpation and palpitations are two different words. So are shudder and shutter. So are lose and loose.

As are "prostate" and "prostrate."

My medical pet peeves are those who don't know the difference between regime and regimen...the first being a milito-political state and the latter being a prescribed course of treatment. I cannot tell you the number of medical "professionals" who cannot use this correctly. And then there is this mispronunciation of centimeters, whereupon some say "sonometers". Yes, Dorothy, there is a sonogram, but that has nothing to do with sonometers, and the latter term can only come about because someone has a non-English speaking accent. Sheesh. And then there was the time I was reading through one nurse's notes, and she was describing a very purulent drainage, but she didn't or couldn't use that term, and the resultant wound was "very pussy". I have never found an adjective for pus, so there you go. And then there is the honorable mention of calling Oxygen stats, instead of Oxygen sats (saturation). And what about "patient can't breath", when BREATHE is the proper verb. How many others here (working in medical/clinical settings) have seen someone spell out CABG...as cabbage? LOL For those who don't know, it is only an acronym for Coronary Artery Bypass Graft, which clinicians just pronounce it as "cabbage", but don't write it down that way. Then that voice box thing in your neck...the larynx...how many times have you heard it called a whole lot of other things...and spelled a myriad of way. I've also seen where people use “exasperated “ instead of “exacerbated”. The world at large has gotten considerably more lazy with regard to proper English. It's not just the medical world; one has only to see the papers of graduate students to see that admission today only requires a faint pulse...and little else.

And then there is this mispronunciation of centimeters, whereupon some say "sonometers". Yes, Dorothy, there is a sonogram, but that has nothing to do with sonometers,

That is indeed a mispronunciation in English, but it probably comes from hearing and using the French pronunciation, which does indeed sound like 'sounti-met-ruh.

The same thing occurs with many Dutch-speaking Belgians, where some pronounce it correctly in the Dutch manner - 'centi-may-ters' and others, mostly older folks, pronounce it in the French manner 'sounti-met-ers' (a sort of mixing of the two pronunciations).

It is easy to mispronounce words that come from a foreign language. For instance Dutch-speakers have laughing fits (or roll their eyes upwards in exasperation) when they hear English-speakers trying to correctly pronounce the name of the painter Van Gogh. (Hint: it is not pronounced 'Van Go' ...)

You would be surprised how many real charts have "cabbage" instead of CABG! I shake my head every single time. Suicidal idealation is another one.

I'm guilty of saying "sono-meters", but only around the older son as it drives him nuts. It's part of the payback for raising him!

It seems the complaints fall into very specific areas, some understandable, some matters of taste, some inexcusable.

I have close to zero tolerance for the story that hasn't seen both a spell check and a grammar check. Those programs aren't perfect, but they'll catch a good 85% of all the goofs. I do not have a problem with the writers making the goofs--non-native speakers, people with learning disabilities, people trying to write on their phone or using voice may have great stories to tell--but I'm irked when they don't bother to find and fix them.

Like others have mentioned, I won't--maybe even can't--read a story that's a brick of text without paragraphs. Same thing with a complete failure to proofread--and our devices are so quick to stick in the wrong word based on a few characters! I want authors to read and fix that.

What the reader wants in a medical fetish story clearly depends on each reader. Some want sex, force, slang, humiliation, etc., and some don't. Some want everything very realistic and clinical, while others want the fantasy that only starts out that way. It's easy enough to stop reading a story when it stops being what I like to read.

For me, the sexualization of children, force, or violence is inexcusable.

Lack of spell check and grammar check and lack of proof reading. If you can get someone else to proof read it for you, great. But if you can't, read it out loud, or even in your head. You'll spot things you might have missed.

Lack of spell check and grammar check and lack of proof reading. If you can get someone else to proof read it for you, great. But if you can't, read it out loud, or even in your head. You'll spot things you might have missed.

That goes for posts as well! Most of us aren’t great writers, but there are tools out there to help us not broadcast our stupidity!

In stories I expect fantasies, but too many are too far out there and totally unbelievable. Prefer more realistic eroticism or exams which don’t always culminate in sex. Don't think there wold be much underage references in the medfet (examinations) section as in other fetish areas like punishsment and enemas. There are some threads that are very sexual, but true life, not fiction.

I do my best to make sure I use proper grammar and punctuation in my posts and stories.

A common error is "masterbation" instead of "masturbation". Spelling mistakes are not in themselves a turn-off for me. However, it seems that making many spelling mistakes is correlated to poor sentence construction.

Many stories are full of clichés… I guess it's very hard to write erotica without repeating oneself. When I think about it, if I told my real life sex life, it would also be repetitive.

Many stories are full of clichés… I guess it's very hard to write erotica without repeating oneself. When I think about it, if I told my real life sex life, it would also be repetitive.

It's a challenge to find new ways to express a familiar concept, but IMO that's a big part of what separates the professionals from the hobbyists.

Nobody expects brilliance from hobby writers who are doing it because it's fun for them, and fun to know people are reading what you wrote. It'd be really nice if they'd spellcheck and format, though.

Everything changes when someone has paid to read what you wrote. They want zero errors (we try, we really do!), characters they care about and maybe identify with, the right mix of fantasy and reality, graphic original description, and lots more. There's a reason most writers can't just knock out a decent story or book very quickly.

I would prefer to read the whole story, before I can make any judgements, but sometimes the writing is so poor, that it makes it hard to continue. The things that I generally don’t like, are over exaggerations, and lack of creativity. In real world sex, people don’t (usually) curse, shout, constantly moan, cry, or ask their partner if they came. Excitement is often expressed through kissing, hugging, increased movement, creatively using your fingers, tongue, and maybe even some nibbling. Many of the sex “stories,” are not sexually exciting. The language is often artificial and scripted.

In addition to semi-illiterate authors, mostly tired tropes and cliches such as:

1) I broke my jaw in a bicycle accident and the nurse had to take my rectal temp.

2) I just turned 18 yesterday.

3) Sniffing the thermometer (one author was really into this).

4) Any ridiculous set-up for a naughty medical procedure.

My pet peeves in reading med fet stories are 1) using non clinical words like pussy, dick, hard on, cum etc instead of the preferred vagina, penis, erection and ejaculation and 2) when a medfet story or video is just a pathway to full sex between the doctor and patient - I love erotic but realistic exams so the doctor should always be fully clothed even if he or she is aroused

Constant snapping of gloves.

Laughably unrealistic bodies. "She was 100 pounds, 5'10", and wore a size DDD bra...." Is this a story about a woman snapping in half from being 30-45% breast?

But she would have to wear size 14 shoes to keep her from constantly falling over forward. I suppose the good new is that she would bounce. (Nothing wrong with normal people with normal bodies. We all have them.)

If the story is meant to be true I dislike when people can't distinguish the difference between reality and fantasy.

@Rigel Oh yeah I saw that kind of stuff. Stories about a "18 year old girl" who hides school grades from her mother, gets spanked, receives enemas, suppositories and rectal temperatures. Yeah, right.