New Story contest

(Topic Idea) A caring boyfriend/girlfriend/husband/wife or any other family member/close friend

Comparing injection attitudes and experiences in youth with getting them now would be my contest entry.

So the current entries are in chronological order

an exam in multiple stations

First physical, unexpected physical, or more thorough/went further than patient expected

Neighbor

Home visit

Friend or family member

Mistress/Sub relationship/scene

a very Unwelcome/Unwanted Chaperon

Young lovers exploring kink and having an erotic experience in the outdoors!

A caring boyfriend/girlfriend/husband/wife or any other family member/close friend

Comparing injection attitudes and experiences in youth

ok my suggestion would be that everyone gives their favorite prompt 3 Points there second favorite 2 points and their third favorite 1 point

my votes

1 an exam in multiple stations

2 unexpected physical

3 home visit

Exam in multiple stations- interesting idea. I like the friendly neighbor idea better but this is my second favorite.

First physical, unexpected physical, or more thorough/went further than patient expected. -too broad, and this is every story on here...

Neighbor - 3 I think this is broad enough to allow for several variations on the theme and different perspectives/stories to appeal to several different interests

Home visit- this is a lot of stories on here...

Friend or family member- this is pretty broad and a lot of the stories already on here involve this.

Mistress/Sub relationship/scene- too fetish specific

a very Unwelcome/Unwanted Chaperon - 1 interesting and could be a good prompt for a lot of different stories appealing to different interests.

Young lovers exploring kink and having an erotic experience in the outdoors! - not bad

A caring boyfriend/girlfriend/husband/wife or any other family member/close friend- too broad, and it is every story on here...

Comparing injection attitudes and experiences in youth- too specific to just one fetish and not enough broad appeal to get many entries.

Neighbor then home visit

So for now using theDR's voting format...

Neighbor - 6

Exam multiple stations - 5

Home visit - 3

Unexpected physical - 2

Chaperone - 1

I say we leave voting open until Saturday.

Here's my votes using the 3 point method:

3- Unwelcome/Unwanted Chaperon

2- Home visit

1- First physical, unexpected physical, or more thorough/went further than patient expected

Yeah sunday seems about right. Everyone happy with the voting system?

3 points - Neighbor

2 points - young couple exploring kink

1 point - Mistress sub scene

Okay so final tally:

Neighbor- 9

Home visit -5

Unwelcome chaperone - 4

But if you have a story that's on a different topic I'm sure people would enjoy that too.

Hope I'm. It too late

Chaperone 3

Unexpected physical - 2

Exam multiple stations - 1

3 Mistress/ sub scene

2 home visit

1 chaperone

Medfet, I'm looking to you to set any other parameters and launch this. There will be plenty of opportunities for future topics. I feel we should just charge ahead with something and see what the results are. Creative juices are starting to flow.

In lieu of a specific theme there could be a list of words that must all be incorporated into the story (theme is fun too)

I love to write stories and have quite a few ideas of various types. Most are erotic in nature and I would not want to be limited as to a particular theme. I would submit some if I knew exactly how to do it. Zity is not very clear on that. Karen Jean

Karen Jean, I have posted a few stories in the "Enema" section. It seems quite simple to just start a new post with your title. One can post additional "chapters" or continuations as one's mind conjures up additional material. One "friend" suggested I take an enema or two, and then get down to posting another installment. Just be sure to check the box to stay signed on when you log in.

I have also used a cut and paste tool to transfer one of my stories from another site. One can add the text under a new heading. Your material would be appreciated, I'm sure!

I love to write stories and have quite a few ideas of various types...I would submit some if I knew exactly how to do it.

Well, you have already found the right place. To post a story, you simply start a new topic in this section (if it's medfet related) and then post any subsequent chapters/parts in the same thread. That allows everyone to comment on your story. Pretty simple really.

Well counting the late votes it's

Neighbor -9

Chaperone- 8

Home visit -7

So if you want to add a story as part of this those are the final tallies.

As others have said, it's easy to post stories and I'm sure no one will mind if you have your heart set on writing a story about an unwelcome chaperone or one of the other themes- by all means post it anyway! Lol

I'll try to get mine posted sometime this weekend. Maybe we should indicate in the tittle if it's part of the story contest/festival (there are no prizes) but I think if it has neighbor in the title that should be clear enough.

No one at this point has mentioned meeting a person of different ethnicity where sexual attraction was a foregone conclusion & then to find because of it they had a chaperone in tow, sometimes perverting (read thwarting) the flow of energy. Irrespective this didn't deter either party. .Lust debauchery & depravity overules clear mindedness. .Excuse being young & threw caution to the wind

This could work both ways. .1) Young woman gets off on older devious men. .2) Older male secretly plans of seducing & defiling young woman,chaperone being more the hindrance but oddly enough the facilitator by standing lookout as events /trysts develop

Ultimately the relationship peters out because of the pressure, they go their own way. .Meet up again sometime later & she's pregnant but to another person. .Still looks as hot as all f*ck & ever so doable yet he's conflicted & doesn't follow through after leading her on right down to having her stripped naked & she lusting to be taken again

Nearly overlooked that she's anally orientated & he likes to see her in school uniform,with long white socks,white cotton underwear & her nubile full bust spilling from her partially unbuttoned blouse

Mamma mia what have you done to my daughter you dirty man !!. .Mother & daughter(s) scenario - protection of innocence ??

I have completed the first few parts of my story. This is my first time trying to write erotica and I welcome any sort of feed back. The story has not come to a close yet, so I will post what I have so far and add to it later as I have time to write.

It is not entire MedFet, but tends to wander across many of the categories. I was thinking of posting it in the Kinky section so as not to promise too specific a category. If that sounds like a good plan I will post a link to it here. OK?

Ok, Here is the link to my story. Let me know what you think. I have more brewing in my dirty mind that will be written out soon.

http://www.zity.biz/index.php?mx=forum;ox=display;msg=774515

You should start reading at Part 1, of course. : )

This is the first i have seen of this topic. Story contest?

Tom & Janet's adventure continues.

http://www.zity.biz/index.php?mx=forum;ox=display;msg=774515

Part 4 has been posted.

Part 5 is almost ready.

Part 6 is in development.

Anyone else wiring, reading, or providing comments?

PS The theme options were neighbor, chaperone, or home visit, as explained in earlier posts.

I have now posted parts 1 thru 6. I have one more episode in mind to wrap this story up.

http://www.zity.biz/index.php?mx=forum;ox=display;topic=96239

(Obviously start with Part 1 if you are just now finding this story.)

When the contest theme was settled as "Neighbor" I started dreaming up a hot naughty neighbor for my story. Now that the story is almost finished I'm realizing that the runner up themes of Chaperone & Home Visit also pay important rolls in my story. There must be some subliminal influence lurking in the back of my mind, mixed in with all the perviness. Hope you're enjoying it so far.

Please leave feedback on the thread or in a direct message to me. I'd love to hear what you think.

Hookajoe

Part 7 is posted.

When I started this project I outlined the entire story first. Then I went back and fleshed out each scene. I greatly underestimated how much writing came out of each of the short scene descriptions in the outline. I have the next part written but it still needs an edit pass. After that I expect one or two more posts to complete the project. That should put be at a total 10 parts.

I keep this thread current with my progress because this is where I first saw the new story contest discussed. I'm not sure how often this thread is posted to, but I look forward to reading works from others. I don't really think of it as a contest, but more of contributing to the group's work. I've read some great stuff on zity and hope that I can return the favor, even if it's just for a few.

My story is finally done and completely posted..

The Generous Neighbor

http://www.zity.biz/index.php?mx=forum;ox=display;topic=96239

I appoligize for how long it turned out to be. I never intended it to become a small book. My next effort will certainly be shorter

I'm still interested in any feedback you care to share. Tell me what you liked, what you wanted more of, or what you think could have been edited out. I'm always looking to improve my technique.

Cheers,

Hookajoe

Interesting idea !

I love this idea! it will finally give me courage enough to upload my story.

You should! It's a great story and you write so well!