Thanks to everyone for their likes and support! I enjoyed writing this fantasy, visualizing this story play out in my head. Part of this came from a suggestion from another member. If you would like to contribute to my next story, please feel free to PM me with suggestions/requests.
Great story, I look forward to read more of your writings!
Great story!
I really enjoyed your story. Especially the fact that you took the time to proofread it. You also didn’t go overboard with the details but still managed to demonstrate just how stressful physicals are at that age. Bravo!
I also enjoyed how you stretched out the telling of the tale. I kept checking to see if a new chapter was available.
Please feel free to write additional stories if you are so inclined. I for one will read them.