Rita's Department Store Adventure
Rita's Department Store Adventure
Rita Donovan, an arrogant 24-year-old sophisticate, is victimized by a thief, runs afoul of a sales girl and others, and is reduced to the status of a spanked and diapered child in a school uniform by the slightly younger woman AND a host of intimidating memories. Will she sink or swim?
My friend, Alec Leamus, finding himself unable to carry on with his fine story, "Rita's Department Store Adventure," sent me a partial draft of Part 4. He asked me if I would finish the story for him, which I have been honored to do. In the process, and for various reasons, I edited the entire story, including the three parts previously posted on several sites. The last half of Part 4 and the whole of Part 5, of course, are entirely my own.
(The original version of Parts 1-3 may also be found on several sites, including the Yahoo groups Strip-Searched, ArrogantWomenEmbarrassed, and dr_psychos_academy.)
I have long been convinced that Alec was writing a classic of the genre, and it's a pity he couldn't finish it himself. But, even though I might not have the same flair for it, I can hope that I have not done it an injustice.
(Revised) by
Alec Leamus and C. Lakewood