Just marking this story to continue reading later

Totally awesome! Great work - I loved the drawn out nature of it all and the objectification of all male patients and how they chose to embrace it or resigned themselves to simple acceptance

I finished reading the story since my last post and I loved the story! Please keep the stories coming!

Another great story! I really like all of your stories and hope you continue to write. Your stories hit all my erotic points. Thanks. Mark

Thanks for another excellent story!

Loved them .. ;)

Fantastic story, Jimmy! Thanks for the hard work!

I'm only on part 6 and I'm already addicted! Great story!!!

You told me to write myself a story, it is unfortunately impossible.

Well, at least you got that part right.

"Jimmy Johnson and Doctor prg " I believe that you are too much agressive towards me

I have said that I like very much the story, I appreciate it,and I agree with it on most of the points

I have just expessed some comments less enthusiastic on a few points

but it seems that the writer wants only congratatulations.it is an error in my opinion

It is more interesting for him to have other suggestions or even some critics.

You told me to write myself a story, it is unfortunately impossible.

it means that you have not noticed that I was a french person or forgot it, so the english language is not naturel for me

it would took too much time if i wanted to write a story in english

You created some really great characters, lot of stuff to work with for a sequel.

Thank you for your comments. It's always great to hear from someone that appreciates and enjoys your work. You have a lot of great ideas for a sequel. My problem is that I have a long list of other new stories that I'd like to write, including sequels to some of my other stories. And after writing something this long, it's difficult to pick right up again doing a sequel. But I will certainly think about it for the future.

JimmyJohnson, loved your story. You touched on a bunch of fetishes.

Like JAWs67 I can see a whole bunch of sequels; Jim and Ashley are an obvious one, Mandy comes to visit Jim, possibility for some 3 way action and of course we know Beth is a voyeur—who will she spy on this time. And absolutely the HSDP study and Dr. Simmons need to be explored—I sort of picture her with a German accent and a riding crop. You have Tom and Mike maybe they get called back in for something. You created some really great characters, lot of stuff to work with for a sequel.

Ok basically get of your dead butt and start writing for us, you have fans waiting.

Hmmmm, I wonder if the College he's attending will require annual health screenings/check-ups? Or perhaps since has shown a 'willingness' to help with medical science maybe he can be selected for further studies. In any event I imagine there are some Student Nurses on campus who'd love to have him as a practice patient. :D

Oh, I'm sure there are all kinds of things that might be required of poor Jim. And if the routine examinations aren't enough, there's always HSDP. :)

Hmmmm, I wonder if the College he's attending will require annual health screenings/check-ups? Or perhaps since has shown a 'willingness' to help with medical science maybe he can be selected for further studies. In any event I imagine there are some Student Nurses on campus who'd love to have him as a practice patient. :D

Esaterman,

I could put money on it that you never believed in Santa, the Easter Bunny or the Tooth Fairy either.

Its called using your imagination.

IT'S FANTASY!.

As stated,

You write something better then and let us be the judge of your work.

The comments from members prove that it has been enjoyed whether politically and medically accurate or not

Please stop nit picking until you prove you can do better.

As we English say:-

"It's not Cricket, Old Boy!"

JimmyJohnson,

An excellent story, really enjoyable. particularly liked the CFNM twists with friends doing the exams. Can't wait for the next story.

Esaterman, we're all awaiting your full-length story contribution. Please make sure that it is technically accurate, fully believable, and has plenty of conversational dialog with a large group of named characters. Oh, and it has to be erotic too -- that's very important! If I can't get hard reading it, it's no good to me. Can you please post it as soon as it's ready? I'm sure we all can't wait to read it.

Yes it was a great story very well related with a lot of details and some surprises at the last parts.

Nevertheless I notice that the story was not really focusing on a group sport physical exam as it was mentioned at the beguinning and as I have expected after the four first parts, it was more focusing on the examination of Jim in front of only one ot two other male students and a few girls or women as medics or observers, and still more to Jim and the two girls he met at the cafeteria of the campus and who were nursing students. On that point, I maintain that, even all is allowed in a fictional story, it was too much incredible that only two nursing students were in charge of his examination for the specific study of the male students volonteers. If it was so important that it seemed for the medical authorities, they would have designed an experienced nurse or doctor to supervise the new nursing students who more over were attending these college physicals for the first time.

Anyway thanks for the pleasure of reading this story.

Very enjoyable as per usual. Yet again you've proven yourself a master of long and hot CFNM medical stories. I especially enjoyed the twist near the end with an examiner having seen Jim with her sister and having a 'thing' for him, didn't see that angle coming at all.

Thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks very much.

Thanks for sharing, your story was were detailed, I liked the slower pace.

JimmyJohnson,

Your story was very good and very exciting. The slow pace of action adds to the excitment. Very erotic too with the mix of humiliation and sexual arousal when being examined or tested by female doctors and his own girlfriends. Karma for you !

That's it folks. I hope you enjoyed it.

Still enjoying this and looking forward to the continuation.

Reading a chapter and you pulling it to pieces really spoils the eroticism of the post.

Precisely why I've chosen to wait for the full story before reading. I've enjoyed all of JJ's stories so far. Yes, there have been minor technical issues, so what? The stories are great erotic entertainment. If I want to learn real medical procedures, there's plenty of resources for that.

Oh for goodness sake, STOP THE CRITICISM!.

It's a story and a very good one at that.

So what if its not clinically or politically correct?.

Here in the UK we wouldn't be any the wiser as to what happens anyway.

Please dont let the site turn into a slanging match forum like the VOY Forums.

You write a story and then we can judge that.

Until then, Please stop finding fault with every chapter as you are taking the cherry off the cake.

Reading a chapter and you pulling it to pieces really spoils the eroticism of the post.

Excellent story. Shame about the nit picking. I look forward to reading more.

and they have forgotten one part of his body

If you would actually read the story as it was intended (fiction, a fantasy) rather than just looking for potential technical mistakes, you might actually enjoy it more. Oh, and I didn't forget that either, as you'll soon see.

Just a comment about part thirteen

it is called "genital measurement"

but I notice that the studing nurses wanted to check the hairs on the body of Jim

which is normal in a growth development study. and they have forgotten one part of his body. .

I am surprised that these young studing nurses have not asked him to turn around and bend over and spread his butts one more time to have a look to check if he has a lot or just a few hairs on his cheeks and around his asshole since it is a sign of puberty development on boys.

Some male teenagers have few hairs, others much more but normally all have hairs and the color may be different of the other hairs or similar.

So I assume that it is a point which must be checked in that kind of study

Looking forward to the rest of the story!

Each new chapter is also good as the former ones and some are very funny.

I like very much the part eight about the station five of the examination.

I think that you have had a great idea with the departure of the male doctor when it is the turn of Jim to be examined because of an occasional reason, an appointment outside, and his replacement by a female doctor who is more strict about rules and pretty rough with the students, requiring from them a complete obedience by getting in position ready for their examination a more long time without any concern for the embarrassment caused by their long exposure.

I like the fact that until just recently she was a civilian doctor physician with the armed forces, who had worked at several of their entrance processing centers and had for over ten years performed thousands of exams on young men and as she was obviously used to see them stark naked and did not mind at all about the feelings of the male students.

Some details are very good like for instance when the male doctor is giving instructions to the male students by caling them "son," while the female doctor calls them by their first name.

I like that because it recalls me my own experience with male adults when I was young. I was often called "son" at school by most of my male PE teachers and also at the army by some of the non commissioners officers and the male military doctors who performed my examination either in a military pre-induction center or later after induction.

It was very frequent at that time, (for me it was the 60's and 70's) that a male adult called a male student or a draftee or a new inductee "son". It was a way to make you understand that you had to obey to instructions because of the difference of age.

I like also the nine, ten, eleven and twelve parts about the growth study but I am surprised that all the measurements and photos can be taken by two young nursing students who are only in second year.

It seems to me that if the growth study is considered as important by the college authorities, it would have been more logical that an experienced female nurse be present in the room to supervise the two nursing students.

She could have been in the room for growth study since the arrival of Jim, or why not comingagain after a pause for a cup of tea just at the beguinning of the measurements after the first set of photos and asking why Jim is not already completely in the nude as he must be according to rules for that part of the growth study.

but it does not matter, it is your story and I like it.

This has become a great story. Keep working on it. With so many possibilities this can go anywhere.

So far so great! Can't wait to read the rest!

This is the half way point, folks. Nine more parts to go.

Thank you Jimmy!

This is an excellent way to relax and read your marvellous story! Keep up the good working!

it is not really to criticize but to make Jim notice when he missed something and may be to impove on these points the followings chapters

As I said at the beginning, there are a total of 18 parts to this story. That implies that the entire thing is already written -- which it is :). I never start to post a story until I have the entire thing completed. If you don't do it that way, you end up wishing that there were earlier parts that you'd like to change, but can't.

But I like also the story as I have said

if I suggest that some ponts could have better or more precise, it is not really to criticize but to make Jim notice when he missed something and may be to impove on these points the followings chapters

I will read the story until his end and enjoy it , believe me

Esterman it is extremely easy to criticize here but writing a very detailed story like this is really tough work. As Jim said free to have a go and we can critique your effort as compared against Jim's. It's also very much about personal tastes and interests which can never suit all.

I am however very much enjoying this story thanks Jim and hoping for some serious humiliation in front of an audience soon... ;)

Really hoping that Jim has a tight foreskin or some other problem that results in him being examined for longer than usual at the next station!

To all that have commented so far, thank you for your comments. I do appreciate them.

And esaterman, I'm not really sure if you actually like the story so far or not -- it's difficult to tell sometimes. But I do appreciate you taking the time to leave your comments. Obviously, everyone has their own opinion on what makes a story interesting or arousing to them personally. Since you have a strong personal opinion on what makes a good story, you might want to take the time to write your own sometime. But it does take a lot of time and effort, especially for a story of this length. As you'll see by the time you reach the very end, I wanted to include some scenes that were vastly different from a standard physical exam. For that reason, I decided to keep some parts of the actual physical exam shorter and with slightly less detail than I've done in my other stories. So most of the decisions I made when writing this story were deliberate, not accidental or by chance, and certainly not due to a lack of effort. After all, we're only about 1/3 of the way into the story so far, with a total of 18 parts.

A few more comments about the story :

I think also that you missed the presence of some members of the staff of the school.

I assume that the very strict rules applied at the physicals are not decided by the doctors because they seem to be only here to carry on the different exams without any words about the rules and the process of the physicals. So in my opinion as it was generally the case, it is rather the chief of the coaches responsible for sports at the college who have decided of the rules or may be the director of the college or vice- director with the agreement of some members of the college board, males and females, if they have been questioned for agreement.

So it would have been interesting to have them present in the gym walking from an administrative station to a medical station to check that all is OK, and that the rules are respected and to be sure also that all the students male have a good behaviour and are enough obedient and to tell with more strength than the girls and male students to each student who would complain or object or would show any reluctance to obey the college instructions that he has no choice than to comply if he wants to enter at the college.

An other point : you have suggested since the beguinning of the story that there would be a crowd of students in the gym and it is logical since you relate a group physical, performed in a gym, not at a doctor's office.

But once they are in the gym you never relate that there is a large group of students lining up to wait their turn at one station or an other and subsequently being able to watch the examination of each other.

You talk only of three students, Jim, Mike who is examined before him,and the next one who is examined after.( In my opinion, it would have been more funny to have only freshmen students examined at the same time and being surprised by this unexpected way to proceed for a physicals.)

It is like that generally in group physicals. Many male students are lining up under the supervision of nurses or coaches. It would be more funny and it would explain best why the students must be undressed almost completely for all the examination in order to not loose time with undressing, even for the first checks of identity or for papers. It is true at the medical stations as well as in front of the desks where some girls are dealing with administrative tasks.

So I am a little disappointed that Jim is never in a large group of students like I have expected after what you have said in the three first chapters.

Also I do not agree with the weigh- in by a male student. I think that it would have been more professionnal if all measurements had been taken by a nurse assisted by a nurse student and the male student just here to check the papers. I would have also preferred if the students would have been instructed to remove their jockstraps for the weigh-in , and to put them on a stool near the scale and then to climb on the scale stark naked. Of course it would be not because the jockstrap can change the result but it would be to comply to rules of the college : the weigh-in of male students must be always done completely in the nude and there is no need for furthermore explanations, it is a rule so it is applied!

After that on the six chapter, I think that you give to the doctor a little too much tasks and some inspections could have been performed more thoroughly. For instance the inspection of the spine which is too fast while we know that it is one very important part of physicals to check the fitness of a student to do sports. I have noticed that when Jim is instructed by the doctor to bend over and to touch his feet or ankles, the young assistant nurse is not behind him, it would have been more interesting for her to stand behind him aside the doctor and to have a perfect look on his back rear, especially his naked buttocks. I know that she has other opportunities to watch them but not in that way which is the best.

the same for the young girl student in charge of the mania folder : she would have appreciated the view if she had stood behind him and as you say she is not in a hurry, she can watch some examination if she wants .

last comment : it is not true when you say that Jim is on full display of his asshole when he is lying on the exam table and instructed by the doctor to lift his legs and knees but to put his feet on the edge of the table. Even if he has his legs and feet widely separated, he does not expose completely his asshole, only the beguinning of the crack. It would have been diffferent if his knees would have been lifted and bend towards his chest with his feet lifted from the table. In that case he would have really expose perfectly his asshole.

when a doctor wants to perform a DRE, he never told you to put your feet apart on the table with knees lifted.

First I want to congratulate you "Jimmy Johnson "for this marvellous story

because your story is exactly what I like the much since it is written with a lot of details and always trying the balance between what can be real and fantasy to make it more funny for readers.

I like when a story is not short but long with many situations and talks.

Your first three chapters are really perfect to introduce the subject with much realism.

I like the idea of a new freshman male college student summoned at a mandatory sport physicals by the college authorities without knowing anything about the process of that sport physicals and trying to know a little more by talking with girls who are checking his papers and giving him mania folders.

I like also the chat in the cafeteria with two girls that he knows from high school and who are students in the second year of the nursing school and seems to have no more information than him about the set up of the mandatory physicals to play golf on the reverse of all the girls students that he will met the next day in the two following chapters who are in charge of administrative tasks for the registration of the students at these sport physicals and who seem to know more than they wanted to say. These girls at the cafeteria seem to do not know what to expect at the male students sports physicals and cannot answer to his questions about it except that they will be themselves involved at these physicals as volonteers of the nursing school for the first time.

Just may be one point on which I think that you have not chosen the more realistic situation.

It is at the end of the third chapter when one student is coming back in the locker room wearing a boxer and not a jockstrap as required by rules for the physicals and tells to Jim and Mike that he was sent back to the locker room when he had reported in front of the first table at the entrance of the gym to follow the instructions to remove his boxer and to wear only a jock. I think that it is too much unbelievable that it is only two young women who can obtain this obedience of the male students. In my opinion, it would have been more logical if it were a male or female coach or both of them who have instructed to this student to come back in the locker room and to remove his boxer to put a jock as required. It must be an instruction given by a figure of school authority to make the boys understand that they must obey without any reluctance and quickly.

It is also why I am a little surprised at the beguinning of the fourth chapter. The physicals are performed in a gym, they are required for sports, it is a group exam, and there is no coaches whatever is their gender, male or female, (the best would have been a pair of coaches for each sport ) who are present in the gym, especially at the entrance of the gym to welcome the boys but also to supervise them all through the different stations, to check the good process and why not to watch partially the examination of each student at one station or an other unless you have decided that they will be at the end of the process to question each student about the reasons of his choice of a sport rather than an other one and to have a look on his body face and back to know what he looks like before starting the sport year.

I think also that you missed the presence of some members of the staff of the school in the gym.

Such an excellent story so far! Keep it coming. :)

Wow! I'm really looking forward to the the remaining parts of this entire story! :)

Great! so excited, write more please !

So far so good, please continue.

This is shaping up to be another great story. The quality and length of the recent submissions has really gone up. Well done.

A good start and just kind of story I enjoy reading

looking forward to the next instalment